All Comments on 'The Fourteenth'

...Bach, Einstein, Feidias, DaVinci, they all were guys.

Fun read, but a bit outrageous. But maybe that was the point?

The point of this story was to write a gender-flipped version of stories where women have their personalities fucked out of them by a sufficiently confident enough guy. And given that Jess is, you know, a goblin/"Ocker," I would hope it's clear this is more fantasy than not. ;P

I've read a fair bit of erotica in my day and after a while it gets repetitive. Guy meets girl, fucks her brains out, and now she can only worship him for some reason. I like the fact that you turned the story on it's head, while still managing to write a hot enough story that I got off. Thanks!

Absolutely love the story, there are too few stories with this sort of gender-reversal.

Incredible story. Thought it had a bit much going on with fantasy creatures, mind control and gender reversal, but you handled it expertly with stellar descriptive text and character development .

I love stories where men are seduced into a role reversal like this. Thank you.

Sexy story! I have to ask, was his dream and reprogramming some sort of goblin magic? Or was it just a combination of her teasing and her pheromones on his human brain?

I've never liked the male goblin stories. They feel crude and nasty, and not in a good way. But these female goblin stories are sooo good. Some are sweet, some (like Jessica here) are rude. But they all make me want to be a good boy for them. Just a dumb, obedient househusband for a pretty goblin. Now that I think of it, I haven't seen many stories with an already married goblin-human couple. Would be great to see more of those sorts of stories. Happy holidays! x