All Comments on 'The Free Trip'

Nice set up. I think I know where this might be going but I don't know any of the details and I could well be wrong. Looking forwards to the next part. Thank you.

If you can't write the word "story" instead of store, it isn't worth reading. Get an editor or two.

Being married to a cuck must make your brains slowly rot from the inside out. Only way to explain this illiterate mess.

Wouldn’t hurt to have an editor do a quick proof read (for simple typos and missing quotation marks in particular) but I’m really enjoying this and looking forward to seeing where you go with it!!

Thank you for posting it!

A bit above average, I'd like more detail on things other than sex. Maybe I missed it but what was the cause of her odd behavior?

Why didn’t you explain the letter and the websites effect on you ? Were you writing another part or what ?

Re: Grammar, spelling, etc.

I learned a long time ago that a good Dictionary and/or Thesaurus can be a good friend(s) to you.

I did not learn English until I was 8 years old. And Slavic does not translate easily into English.

Bonne chance. (French)

Messy and boring.

Why hasn't she shared the free trip with her husband? Kind off strange.