All Comments on 'The Freezing Point of Pain'

Was it pleasure for them or a prolongation of the pain losing themselves in sex and smothering all feelings? Hard to say but all powerful story.

I knew it was going to be a different story based on the title. At first I was put off, but you did an excellent job painting a picture even if it wasn't pleasant at times. I would have given it a five if I found anything in the story having to do with the actual theme of the contest.

...on the other hand, I am going to look and see if you have any other stories...when I'm in the right frame of mind...lol.

Thank you for your feedback. I was trying for something with a little more heft. Glad you found some merit in it.

Good story, albeit short and complicated. Lots of things going on. I like the general theme, and is full of good writing. Just a lot of ideas, not fully realized.