All Comments on 'The Futanarium Experiment Ch. 02'

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Saqwana1Saqwana1over 4 years ago
wow

wow she went megalomaniac fast.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Woowwwww

Nicely written and bodybuilding description is as good as snekguy which is also one of my favourite author. Back to back chapters as new year gift would be nice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice Hermaphrodite story

Your art of writing is as good as snake guy which is one of my favorite authors and so yeah keep them coming.

FoxyannaFoxyannaover 4 years ago
Keep em coming

Loved both chapters... Second one was better than the first and I hope you're planning another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
FYI: You want to try not to repeat words in a sentence...

and if they are an adjective or adverb, try not to repeat them in a paragraph.

You wrote: "Supposedly, she was supposed to..."

Having two forms of 'suppose' does NOT double, or increase at all, the dubiousness, or unlikeliness of an event. LOL

The effects from the second dose of radiation were a bit over the top, but let's see how you use the 7' tall,16" dicked, green? cum shooting shemale, before there is a final decision.

(Technically, because futanarium was used to írradiate Beth, it should have turned her into a Futa, and Futas, by definition have both sex organs. It seems maybe the supposed futanarium might have shemalium, instead. No?) LOL

GeoD

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Thank you for all the feedback. I have a few more stories I am working on, including new chapters to current stories. I promise you will see new stuff soon!