All Comments on 'The Gala Ch. 02'

This story already sounds like it is going to be beyond interesting and if I am not mistaken, a very enjoyable and fun read with a few laughs along the way. I anxiously await your next chapters.

J.D.

Loving it so far. Very well written, and makes the reader (me, at least) anxious for more.

I appreciate the introduction of this chapter. It helped me set my expectations.

I agree with other comments that the scene seems to be mostly set for an interesting weekend.

Exploding prostate doesn’t sound like a very good selling point or a positive visual for that matter. I understand that trust is the basis of any good D/s relationship but I would have major reservations knowing that someone who I put my complete trust and devotion into would purposely lie by omission. It seems at that point the idea of winning the competition was more important to the Dom than the subs safety or well being which is even more disconcerting and somewhat frightening.

Excellent fantasy.