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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Needs an edit, story repeats itself

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good story, but

as it was already mentionened, it repeats itself and could/should be Extended.

ProfDavrosProfDavrosover 5 years ago
Fun quickie

Enjoyable story, quickie fun.

Names me wish I had such friends when younger.

Pity about the story repeat.

ti2xgrti2xgrover 5 years agoAuthor

Thanks I agree the repeat is regret-able, I some how pasted the text twice when I did the upload. Haven't yet figure out how to fix it.

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