All Comments on 'The Game Ch. 02'

by devil_dreams

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Very strange

Odd, not sure where this is going...

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 14 years ago
A little slow in the beginning, but I hope that the action picks up in the next chapter.

The story needs more sex, the ass crack fuck was alright, but the big dude needs to fuck her in front of her family.

That's what I'm waiting for.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
eh... okay

you need to write more it is good but it definitely needs more sex i want to see the dad fucking the son or the daughter or the wife i want to see the captors doing them in front of the dad

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
INCREDIBLY BORING.

JEEZE. GET TO THE ACTION.

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