All Comments on 'The Game Ch. 16'

YOU are a GEM an absolute GEM!!!! Your stories are incredible. The realism and humanity in your 1st person thinking and telling of the story is actually the BEST on this site!!!! Bringing Mary into the story opens up soooooo much more for you to develop. I certainly can't wait for the next Chapter of The Game. I love how much of a real woman you are in your stories. KEEP going girl!!!!!

<p>This one was really different, but fun. It feels like your story thread is in a bit of a transitional phase, and it's pretty tantalizing. It sure has me guessing which way you'll go, and what you're setting up. Whatever it is, it'll be worth the wait, and worth the read.</p>

<p>As far as I'm concerned, there are few writers in all of Lit. who are in your class. I'm thrilled to death that you're back in front of your computer and bringing this kind of fun to us. Many thanks.</p>

<p>Please keep 'em coming.</p>

<p>Snow Snake</p>