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by AreYouForScuba

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

worst possible POV choice. Automatically alienates half of your audience, and it never, ever, rings true, even for the half you're writing for.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Inappropriate verb tense choice & too irritating to read past the 2nd paragraph.

AreYouForScubaAreYouForScubaover 1 year agoAuthor

Let's see if I can fix that. Thanks for the feedback.

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