by prophet007
I first saw Chapter 3 under New Stories, and went back and read Chapters 1 and 2. All very well written, with a good mixture of background narration, character development and sex. I look forward to reading Chapter 4 and leaerning what new punishments and humiliation will be inflicted on our hero.
Good premise.
Nicely paced.
But all so one-sided. She doesn't touch his cock and/or balls at all. She doesn't have him jerk off while she watches and gives instructions.
She doesn't force him to inhale the scent of her pussy. Or to taste it (except on his fingers).
Four stars.