All Comments on 'The GFBJ Ch. 05'

by VallesMarineris

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MormonJack 8 months ago

Wow... what's not to like here! It's every man's fantasy to watch the two ladies going at it, especially when one is you lover (who is also devoted to you.) And then get to participate. This was hot - not sure why it's not scoring better. 5 stars from me, VM and thank you!

VallesMarineris 8 months agoAuthor

@MormonJack, yeah, someone really seems to take offense at this story series. I can see that reader giving me a one-star rating right after each story is published. Drags down the overall a lot because there are so few other ratings. Oh well, haters gonna hate. Hopefully, other readers will counter with better ratings. Thanks for yours.

kiwi_subslut about 2 months ago

Yep me too, loving this story. Wonderful construct, told well! Thank you!

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