All Comments on 'The Gift'

Sad, but I laughed my ass off. The Bear likes it. A happy ending, just not traditional. It was right up there with "Preoccupied" by Papa Toad. Thanks. 5 stars.

The BEAR

Great. Short and well done.

Like shooting fish in a barrel!

5

Another clueless husband. Maybe he was setting her up? (A well done story.) D

That was hilarious! 4.7*

Funny

A short BTB story, but without the violent ending.

Great line at the end, so I'll give it a 5.

Nice twist. thanks

Clever. An easy five stars.

Excellent tease. Really wanted her reaction and their verbal confrontation.

Very good short funny story. Cheater gets it in the end.

That kind of off the cuff comment leading to a thermonuclear meltdown is classic!!

Good one. Nice closure at the end.

Short but sweet -- it didn't need anything else. 5*

That worked. Why do cheaters think they won't get caught?

very nice tie up at the end.

I’m dreaming of a divorced Christmas, while my ex wife finds men to blow

One of the best 750 word project stories i have read

10 Big Blazing Stars. LOL that was so funny, but very well done. How many women did I meet in Silicon Valley like that working their way to the top using their bodies. LOL many many. There is a lot of stress there because the cost of living is so high. The women are all looking for the 'dream' when they go out to a club. They have to be young, good looking, make really good money, drive a porche' and have a 'gold card' just to get a dance. LOL These women won't even dance with you unless they think you have 4 out 5 LOL Then you stand a chance. Great Writing, Great story. Great Effort. Thanks, Buster2U

Bullseye 🎯

Completely believable. Exactly how it would happen with one guy bragging to another. I have found that the old saying "loose lips sink ships" is even more true when lubricated with alchohol. 5/5

I'm her mechanic...good

This is a very good example of the best of 750 words. Most of the ones I've tried to read are quite poorly done. This is excellent.

At our company, it was the same, and boy, watch out for those bitches wanting to climb over your body to reach the next level!!!!

Now THAT was a great response.

Brilliant! I just love short, short stories.

What people will do to get a head and what silence will get you when you learn the truth.

Sad how trust and love are so easy to abuse.

Good but it felt like the beginning or outline for a story. Whats the obsession with 750 words, why can't it be 1.5k or 3k.

Not nearly enough retribution.

Bullseye! Very witty and very amusing.

JR

This was a fantastic read but it looks like it had to be butchered to accommodate this absolutely most stupid and so incredibly irritating 750 words garbage it pains me to read a absolutely superb piece of work that has to be murdered just to accommodate a stupid contest that what you win is nowadays hardly worth anything. This writer has already accomplished such great things and it pains me to see them ruin one of their own fantastic stories to prove that they can write a 750 words . This writer doesn’t need to prove anything I just want to read his great stories in there full sentences and words. Sorry I do apologise if I upset anyone but I get so frustrated when I start reading then it gets really good aka juicy then it all of a sudden just dies like you don’t get the full story like what revenge does he take etc so I do apologise for my rant

The MC husband was a total idiot, a real brainless monkey who well deserved his whore wife and to be cheated. If it were not for one of her lover, the idiot donothing husband would have stayed forever looking at another man groping his wife, while drinking alcoholics at the bar.

This short tale seems not much different from the usual cuck tales with a total whore wife and a total submissive blind sheep husband: no husband with a male brain would have accepted another man dancing in that sexual way with his wife, in front of all, without reacting at all, just like a sheep.

Good story. Nice punchline.

I hit 1 by mistake. It's a 5

Short and very funny, made me lol. Great entry into the 750 word challenge.

Great short story. It covered past, present and future. A rare 5 star 750 word story!

This short tale would have gain the 5 stars if the husband were not described like a brainless monkey. But, since it's not one of the endless femdom cuck-raac tales, it's 5* anyway. Next time put a male brain in the head of the husband.

Now THAT was good!

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4 ****

Short and clever

The good and bad of 750 word stories. Some are complete and provide closure to the reader. Most end up being a teaser and need a part two to feel completed.

Had to fit in 750, but would love a follow up to how he destroyed the cheating skank slut both financially and emotionally in the divorce. Although, not sure how you could crush someone who has no soul. If nothing else, hope the STD's do the bitch in. Good job!

Their marriage was a joke. Great punch line!

Neat 750! Easy 5 stars and thank you!

Lifestyle66 apparently considers any response to adultery other than asking for the other man’s cum to be a Burn.

Let me explain again for the cucks and any newbies: BTB, or Burn The Bitch, requires that the traitor slut be Punished! Divorcing the whore is NOT punishment. It’s simply letting the government know that the marriage contract has been broken. Alimony is not a punishment. It’s simply the consequence of her ambition. She prostituted herself to a much higher salary than her husband.

For examples of actual punishments, I suggest reading FTDS’ stories.

ZK

Haha.

That was sad yet still funny.

It would have been good if I could have more.

"Yeah, he said 'alimony, the gift that keeps on giving.'" - Actually, he didn't say that, but he probably would have!

Great ending. Thanks

Great ending!

Attaboy

Finally, a 750 word story that doesn’t need expanding. Nice story.

Too short.

Good story but overly cliched title -- 201 just on this site -- so it gets a 1.

Too short for my taste! I'm used to stories 17 to 37 pages and yes there is an actual Author here at Literotica that writes stories that long flawlessly and He's my Favorite! BurntRedStone is second to NONE!

Oh yeah, 4 stars. A longer story would have got you 5.

Very good for a 750 word story.

Now that’s how you write a 750 word story!! 5*

Cookingwithgas

You nailed that one. Another great final line to add to LW’s top 10, alimony, the gift that keeps on giving. Can’t beat that.

Well done !

Good one! I’m impressed that a lowly mechanic knows what quid pro quo means. Anyway, five stars ⭐️ for this one.

Short and sweet. And I dislike the 750 word “exercises."

Great short story!

A 5⭐ last line. Thanks for the share.

Morale to the story. Don’t take your spouse to a party if you have been doing “the naughty” at work. Ouch!

Well ...

This was a story often told.

You can add to that

the usually uninteresting format

of the flash story.

But ...

The ending was clever and humorous.

Both of which get thumbs up from me.

Even though the story is lacking,

the ending gets top ratings from me.

@anon - you (and people like you) are what's wrong with the world. The moreale to the story is to not cheat, not "hide your crimes better". Is your morale when hearing about rape also "should wear gloves and condom so you don't leave DNA evidence" instead of "rape is bad, mmmk?"

Fuck, how I'm starting to hate these fucking 750 word fucking "stories."

I must admit I am beginning to tire of these 750 word stories.

Some stories I have read have shown ample potential only to finish; a simple follow-up sequel later on would be great.

So frustrating.

I don’t understand why people would read a 750 word story and then complain that they hate 750 word stories. Sheesh!!

MORAL of the story is that his MORALE was low after his wife cheated

Pretty good story for a 750 word attempt. 4 stars from Xluckylee

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Fun Stuph!

11/10!!!!!

Well done.

Brilliant and hilarious

So, I take it you're in Montana? By the way, what's the dirtiest part of your body?

Nice ending. Good effort.

Nice. Sort and sweet and delivered pefectly.

Wooooooowwwwwww...!

Why do corporate sluts insist on bringing their husbands to corporate functions?

A short and concise 'burn the bitch' story, love it.

btb