All Comments on 'The Gift of the Makeout'

by JuanSeiszFitzHall

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lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

Good little story, and exploring her boundries

yowseryowserover 1 year ago

Brilliant

Oh this is a sweet one, imaginative, enchanting, with suspense and lovely bodies to go along.

'It was amazing, that between us we had sufficient skill sets for a project of soft-core silliness.'

Methinks an acting career is not out of place for either.

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'Juan Seisz FitzHall' is (big surprise) a pseudonym, under which I have published three erotic novels at smashwords.com: 'Mega Platinum VIP,' 'The Dance Game,' and 'Erotopia,' which together make up the trilogy 'The Erotichronicles.' That trilogy is finished. If the characters...