All Comments on 'The Girl Across The Street Ch. 04'

You are really starting to just repeat basically the same story from other series, just with new characters, in slightly different situations.

Customer you are a great writer and this one started wel!. But somewhere in the third page it collapsed.

i hope you keep going and hope ch.04 wil come soon.

Fantastic series! Please continue it!

I reckon this story doesn’t really belong in this category, more like Erotic Couplings. Or Sex Fantasy if that existed.

Yep, this is one weird story...I like it, but it is odd how the 'pandemic issue's drive the story to where it has gone/is going...

Still, overall, **5** stars, for ingenuity if nothing else!!

@MADDOGINTEXAS

appreciate the comment. i almost abandoned the series after page 1 when i skipped to the end and saw your comment. i had actively been thinking how annoying it is for people to write about covid if it's not part of the plot, knowing that at some point it would no longer be a problem.