All Comments on 'The Girl from the Ouachita Ch. 03'

Great chapter and just reading about their kiss was scorching.

5 BIG FAT FLUFFY TWINKLING STARS!

Great story! Hope it continues!

Outstanding!

5*, great as always. Looking forward to more!

Absolutely love it. 5 stars. Keep ‘em coming.

Great story and writing skills. I love it

👍

Very nice!

Great story, just need the HEA! Thanks for this!

Your detailed descriptions are wonderful and I really enjoy that you write in the different categories so well. I favor the LW section between 3.5 and up but I'm exploring more. Thanks and never stop writing.

Great addition to the story so well written! I get lost all the time when I look up it takes a second to come back home! Very graphic and detailed writing. I hope you are planning to take us through college with Jo and all the interesting pitfalls that could provide.

Cheers

SAGE

Enjoying the story. One small nit--at the dance, you say that Jo isn't wearing a bra, but when they are in bed, Chris removes the non-existent bra. Otherwise, nicely dome!

Extremely well written. A good story with characters your readers care about. By far one of the best I’ve read on here. Can’t wait for the next part.

I say again...Bravo Texican!! I was hoping for another strong addition to your story and you did not disappoint. I also like the inferred secrets between Jo and his mother and sisters and look forward to getting the skinny on that in the future.

Great story and I really hope it continues. Agree with others would be interesting to know what the sisters and mother were saying. Would really love to see where this goes!

How about some more!

NEXT ?!?!?! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Excellent!

He's 25 with no discussion on birth control with an 18 year old?

It should be "UC Berkeley" (note spelling) or just "Cal".

Yeah, it was long overdue. The fine on that particular library book was more than could be covered by all of the gold in Fort Knox. I'm speaking metaphorically of Chris and Jo removing the Platonic from their status. 5/5