All Comments on 'The Girl With Pink Hair: Pt. 03'

Absolutely spellbinding! 5 stars!

I'm not going to waste words telling you how good you are. You already know it.

I will say you'd be a bona fide sadist not to have these parts come out more often than a year like the second one! Two months like the third one is far more gentle to us readers.

Very very good, I’m fully engaged with pretty much every character you’ve included, although I’m not completely sure where you’re taking this plot wise. I really hope you have a fully formed story arc already planned somewhere, this is too good to either leave as a dead end unfinished story or rush it and give us a finish that works but isn’t what the story so far deserves.

Thank you for writing and posting here on Lit, regards, Ppfzz. 5⭐️