All Comments on 'The Girl with the Zipper Tattoo'

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I was expecting her the tattoo to have been covering a scar from an autopsy incision. This was so much worse [complimentary]

Super creepy!

Case21Case217 months agoAuthor

Thanks so much! Actually, in the first draft of this story something *even worse* happened to Hunter after he opened the zipper, but that version was rejected by the Literotica mods so I had to tone it down a bit. (I guess I watch too many horror movies by David Cronenberg and Ari Aster.) I'm glad it's still creepy, though! :)

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Heh, i thought he'd end up with a zipper himself. The ending was a bit weak - sorry you had to change it - but very good story!

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