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All Comments on 'The Girls of Club Aphrodite Ch. 02'

by FreddieTheCamel

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luedonluedonabout 4 years ago
Maybe I'm starting to see why it's in 'Reviews & Essays'

Chapter 2 is so different from the first chapter. So now we have more wisdom from our two participants - the gentleman client and Fatima the working girl.

But the title of the story is The Girls of Club Aphrodite. So do we get to talk with more of the 'girls'?

I commented on Mr. Thecamel's earlier (brilliant) series about Lola that I would like to see him submit a story in the Loving Wives category. The commentariat over there is so much more active than in other categories.

Lue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Very nice writing voice, and I liked the slightly nonstandard plot.

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I write both professionally and for fun. The stories and essays I post on this site are for fun. I've also taken the first steps to self-publishing under the name Freddie T Camel, although more as an experiment than an ambition. I want to write stories that have emotional res...