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All Comments on 'The Going Away Gift'

by Storyteller1978

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StrappySandalsStrappySandalsabout 1 year ago

Hot, fuck-crazy, mature babe gettin’ her share!!! Loved it and pictured the porn star Deauxma in the starring role!!! Nice!!!

DessertmanDessertmanabout 1 year ago

This one also needs editing; too many errors and omissions.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Your grammar is dreadful.

Wiz1002Wiz1002about 1 year ago

Great story of young guy ;almost a virgin) with the sexy hot cougar. However the dialogue was rushed overall for me to give full marks.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Just kind of dumb, stilted, long-winded. Typos really mess up the flow - need to proofread...

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Bored Husband with an overactive imagination and spare time on his hand. I prefer women on the fuller side, pantyhose, yoga pants and MILFs, so most stories will contain some aspects of those. I'm also open to requests. Want your name used and a fantasy written out about ...