All Comments on 'The Goodbye'

You need to make your style less factual and more descriptive, more fluid.

I liked the style of writing and the sex was hot. I got a litle confused because you start off by creating Amy as someone to feel sorry for but then we find out she's a little mean and by the end we realize she's into using guys. Still a great story, but not sure I liked those types of characters.

Sorry, but you turned me off before the end of the second paragraph.