All Comments on 'The Gray Fox Pt. 02'

I'm so happy you decided to keep it a Bella/Damien relationship. Thanks for listening! Great chapter and i'm dying to read the third soon!!

I'm also happy you kept the relationship between Bella and Damien. In the last chapter I felt annoyed at the idea that he was just using her to get to her friend. I like where this is going much better!

I got to say this story line is going well and very impressed. What do you think about the idea of Jamie all the sudden not feeling right as she got home so she decides to go back to Bella's place which is jarred open a little as when he came in it was not shit all the way. This makes Jamie walk in to check on her friend to see Damien fucking Bella and kissing her. Then as she stands their in surprise just have Damien convince Jamie to come join them. Where Damien gets to fuck them both and can even maybe have them both have their first lesbian experience together.

The lesbian idea sounds boring and played out. There are plenty of stories on the website with that same thing, it'll be boring if Jaime comes over and "Surprise!" Jaime is in on it and Bella doesn't mind. It would be cooler if Bella had to keep Damien a secret some how.