All Comments on 'The Guardians Ch. 01'

great storyline and easy text..cant wait for the next instalment!!

I am shocked! This is such a very interesting story so far. I honestly cant wait for you to write the next chapter. I also find it very fascinating how you included actual history into this story. NOW, i am busy reading all about the names :) hehe.

Please write the next chapter soon!

Yeah man, i agree! The story line is just simply intriguing! And oh my god... i could feel and imagine every single detail that you wrote... made my skin crawl!

Oh MC! Pls pls pls write more! I'm like your greatest reader now!

Hahaha. this story should have a rating more than 100! Wooohooo! I knew those two were going to have wild sex. you really can spin a story girl!

Hey musecues... pls pls pls write faster! I have been looking for your new submissions almost everday! Hehehehe. I really really wanna know what happens next! Do write in soon yeah!

good plot, great characters and great sex! wooohooo!

I think this is going to be a great piece of work that has some very interesting references. I do hope you'll write a new chapter soon because I am dying to read what happens next!

How can a Princeton grad NOT know who Durer is? Really???

historian and lit. major and doesnt know him plus she speaks italian but cant read the etching

I hope that you will add more history to all of your stories. Thank You for remembering the Nerds who love to read....LOL

you need an editor, there is no flow to your story, its all over the place and your tenses are completely mixed up.

A good idea though.