All Comments on 'The Guardians of Justice Ch. 02'

hoping to throw so much shit at the fan to locate the pieces that stick then use them as phony proof, TK U MLJ LV NV

So glad this chapter has finally "hit" the open world of the Internet! Sure the next chapter will be "handed over forthwith"! We'll ALL will have to cross our fingers that whatever the delays for this chapter are not repeated - - EVER!

WW the ALL does not include YOU! YOU, kind sir, PLEASE KEEP WRITING!

The "Chief's advice was sage..." resonated with this reader!

One Day at a Time,

The Ol' Man

The next chapter has been submitted, and I really do hope it will be published in a timely manner.

Hi WW,5* chapter as usual.Good to see it at last,and also good to see the old man back with his comments after his recent break.Cheers,Malcolm

WW, I will put my foot in it and say it is Jenna who used the burner phones, just because of the way she reacted to Cindy in the powder room. I was thinking of the main big ones up for being nominated, but feel that this could be just one of those IC side trails that leads into a story other than the main thread.

All that aside it is another 5*+ also hope that Literotica pull their fingers out and allow your posts through as expected by their readers. WW keep them coming even if you have to fill in with a true old fashioned full family vacation in the sun or the cold of Canada in winter, just keep your words coming.

For some reason when I tried to log in to write this the site would not allow me to enter the full robot code hence being Anonymous post

Yet posted by your friend from over the pond. 666Iceman

lily wargrave is the lady on the burner.

Wow, you did it again, WW, absolutely terrific story, worth a 10* out of 5!

On so many levels a well written story, don't know where to start to express my praise.

Thanks for bringing Harlow down step by step. That's a personal craving for justice!

Thanks for the ongoing appreciation of the veterans! Gonna confess here, that I never needed to go to the army in my country, even 've been a conscientious objector. But one thing is to oppose political leaded wars. It never included having prejudice against soldiers in person, much less to the fallen. Or they gave their life following their own convictions or they followed orders willing to take the consequences. Who else in gods name has the balls to this? I cannot other then respect it!

Thanks for the outstanding job of taking an actual threat in our world, not only the USA! but upcoming EU election terms in May as well. Elections probably 've been corrupted since hundreds of years or even senator votes bought in ancient Rome.

So it's part of human flaws and history. But also today! By social media, by exterior governments, by whoever, not wanting to discuss it taking political party position. But being aware of this 'hidden' danger, difficult, better impossible, to discover as a citizen. Doesn't matter if the evil is called Russia or China or Multinational Capitalism Powers.

Well, I'm sure listed only some points here which I appreciate most. But I liked this and all your other stories on many more levels, also not mentioned here.

Keep writing! And being one of the 'addicted': please hurry!... :)

Great writing, as usual.

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by assembling a super team for able assistance, TK U MLJ LV NV

Another cliffhanger. Hate those cheaters at elections.

*****Thanks for sharing.