All Comments on 'The Haigh Loft: Pilot'

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ladylicker1ladylicker15 months ago

That was delicious! Very fun and hot. Thanks for sharing.

SirDigbyChickenCaesarSirDigbyChickenCaesar5 months ago

"I know, but it's different," said Jayda with no hint of offense. "You never have any money either."

As a hobby writer, I shouldn't have laughed.

Minor correction: "bosom" refers to the whole chest; a single person with "bosoms" implies multiple racks. :p

toesucker1toesucker15 months ago

Well written, well plotted, just really all-round well done. Oh, and HOT.

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Long time reader, first time author, wondering how this will go and not expecting much.

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