All Comments on 'The Haigh Loft: Pilot'

Well written, well plotted, just really all-round well done. Oh, and HOT.

"I know, but it's different," said Jayda with no hint of offense. "You never have any money either."

As a hobby writer, I shouldn't have laughed.

Minor correction: "bosom" refers to the whole chest; a single person with "bosoms" implies multiple racks. :p

That was delicious! Very fun and hot. Thanks for sharing.