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All Comments on 'The Hard Body Clerk's New Beginning Ch. 09'

by dlsloan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
hard body

This is first story I have enjoyed since half the Hard Body stories first started. You stopped respecting her and they lost their vivacity. Now, it seems you MIGHT be respecting her!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
About time ...

This is great. Having read most of the previous chapters, it looks like you're moving back in the right direction; telling a good *story*.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great turning point in the series

Since I love all of cori's adventures, I thought I would leave some comments on the best of the series.

Having Norm bring out a lot of Cori' slutty submissive nature, but then pushing to far an hard and losing her was a great turn. Her intelligence used to balance her sluttiness makes for a great aspect to a long series.

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My stories generally feature exhibitionism and/or non-violent non-consent such as blackmail. I appreciate all feedback, both positive and negative, as I'm always looking to improve my writing. I also welcome feedback and suggestions for story ideas at dlsloan31@gmail.com.