by dlsloan
Since I love all of cori's adventures, I thought I would leave some comments on the best of the series.
Having Norm bring out a lot of Cori' slutty submissive nature, but then pushing to far an hard and losing her was a great turn. Her intelligence used to balance her sluttiness makes for a great aspect to a long series.
This is great. Having read most of the previous chapters, it looks like you're moving back in the right direction; telling a good *story*.
This is first story I have enjoyed since half the Hard Body stories first started. You stopped respecting her and they lost their vivacity. Now, it seems you MIGHT be respecting her!