All Comments on 'The Heart Shaped Pendant'

Well crafted, This story showed a tenderness not often seen in Erotic Fiction.

Nigel:

You've written a masterpiece. It's different, it's interesting, and it's erotic without pressing the point. Congratulations and Thank You. Hope that you keep it up. Ronnie W.

very odd: a romantic, poetic story about fellatio. Who'da guessed it? By the end of the story I was halfway in love with Charlene as well, and she died before the story began!

Well done.

this was a very sweet love story, touching and erotic, but without extremely overt suggestions. charlene certainly seems to be a very wise old lady...

Very nice, very moving. JimDinMN

What a fine piece of work.

I very much enjoyed the characters in it, how the authour made them anything but cardboard cutouts.

A hopeful, enlightening and very sweet piece of work.

Well done!

To fill a sleepless night, which happens all too often, I read some of the work that I passed over the evening before. They are pieces that, for one reason or another, didn't appeal to me.

Mostly, I find it's a time waster.

Thank you for this delightful exception. I'll be looking for some more from you.

Thank you, it was educative and erotic, humane and gentle.

Bye

John

I loved your story very much. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Boyd

This was a truly masterfull telling of a very sweet story. The love expressed in it is truly sublime and I look forward to more of your work.

A wonderful piece of work. What a way to decribe and include a character that had already died before the start of the story. Looking forward to read the sequel about this these characters.

i understand i should have read this story first...duh...Thank you so much for sharing this peice of lovely work so filled with love and caring, since i've read chapter 2 already i will go on to 3 now. i can't wait to see what it unfolds. respectfully

I read your story during two evenings and it was hard to stop for rest, but was high on my list of things to finish

Looking forward to read the next ones

I loved this story. I'm such a sap!!!

Very evocative story, well written and ran that line that defines erotic. My congratulation. "FORKED RADISH" !!? as a euphemism for a penis is just plain weird though. Have you looked at a radish, at a forked radish! If my penis looked like that I'd see a doctor promptly.

A sweet story about love and loss where a man getting blown by several women of the same family isn't the interesting part, its simply the catalyst for recounting wonderful memories. The love you painted was poetic and sweet.

Also you can say penis. I don't know what a forked radish is. Just say penis, please. Seriously, I'm just imagining a weird radish with two points like a two fused carrots. I cannot describe how distracting the fact that penis, dick, cock, member, Johnson, stiffy, hell even Willy, wasn't used at all.