by Rosebella
This story is developing well, even if the chapters are a bit on the skimpy side. A most entertaining story, well written and showing a lot of promise. I look forward to reading more soon.
Five stars and thanks.
Interesting...... Wanting to see more in the series. Possibly longer chapters too.
Thanks for the kind words and constructive criticism. I am now working on a 3rd and much, much longer chapter. Coming soon, and thanks for reading! :)