All Comments on 'The Helpful Roommate Ch. 01'

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SonoraRose about 1 year ago

More please

Anonymousabout 1 year ago

Really good start. I, for one, can't wait to see where this relationship goes.

prefermature about 1 year ago

Great work....nice to see good writing and a great story amidst some of the bad ones here. I can't wait to see how this story develops.

Anonymousabout 1 year ago

Lovely story, brilliantly written. More please...

Anonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story, where will this go?

Anonymousabout 1 year ago

Good premise.

But sex is all too rushed. No tension. No teasing. No real foreplay. Just -- BOOM -- mouth on pussy.

And no real buildup/teasing then.

Three stars.

Anonymous12 months ago

Well written. Nicely paced. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

JBorson 11 months agoAuthor

Thank you all for the feedback, I hope you all got a chance to check out the rest of the story! Anon, sorry you didn't enjoy this one as much, but I hope the other chapters were more to your liking.

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