All Comments on 'The Hidden Side of Mrs. B'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
A Great story

That was such a turn on i couldnt figure why she didnt just use the internet and surf it for someone that else that could make her happy besides derek.

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Excellent story - poor grammar/spelling

My rating would have been 100% if this story had been better edited. There were so many typos, missing words and improper grammar that I had to mark it down. I'm looking forward to more stories about these two people, but I hope you have someone proofread it before you submit it. This has the potential of being a very good series, with the housewife being made to do more and more exciting things that she never thought she was capable of.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Needs editing.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Just

Just another horny old whore who finds a.kid who coincidentally has an enormous schlong. Just saying.

Anonymous
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