by eronoire
Just another horny old whore who finds a.kid who coincidentally has an enormous schlong. Just saying.
My rating would have been 100% if this story had been better edited. There were so many typos, missing words and improper grammar that I had to mark it down. I'm looking forward to more stories about these two people, but I hope you have someone proofread it before you submit it. This has the potential of being a very good series, with the housewife being made to do more and more exciting things that she never thought she was capable of.
That was such a turn on i couldnt figure why she didnt just use the internet and surf it for someone that else that could make her happy besides derek.
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga.