All Comments on 'The Hired Gun Ch. 05'

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OgbaNcha1OgbaNcha111 months ago

I enjoyed this recap style writing. I'm also beginning to warm up to Jaquan, Andre and Esther. Can't wait to see Babette's story with the MC. Hope we don't have to wait long. I was literally checking every day. Lol.

mondotokenmondotoken11 months agoAuthor

The idea was to show you things from the other side and explain Jaquan's supposed villlainous turn against his cousin through extreme coercion and emotional abuse. Renee Kelly went off the rails after he did a shitty sneaky link with Yoli (MAXIMUM BADONKADUNK Series)...among other things.

gydeongydeon11 months ago

I actually missed the MC in this chapter. Putting that aside I always wanted you to write from Jaquan's pov. You know who's pov I also would like to read as well lol.

gydeongydeon11 months ago

The infamous Renee Kelly

OgbaNcha1OgbaNcha111 months ago

Infamous Baby Mama 2 and her New Orleans witch heritage 😂 I dared to wish she was in love with MC. She's cold blooded just as I like them. I see the next chapter is out, thanks!

mondotokenmondotoken11 months agoAuthor

Damn you OgbaNcha1.

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