All Comments on 'The Hole Ch. 01-03'

Really great writing and storytelling.

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Working on the next part.

Amazing! Love the slow burn story. Very unique setting and plot as well. Hoping for more!

I enjoyed your story and hope you continue it. I’ll look for the next chapter.

Your style is excellent and quite readable. Still, I have two suggestions, First, show more tell less. And second, focus more on the cuck’s feelings, e.g. his internal conflict, his pain, his angst, his humiliation, his satisfaction, his arousal, and the eroticism. The feelings drive them and showing more than telling reveals. The best first person cuckold stories are all about the cuck’s feelings. The purpose of the sex is the

@cwcobblestone

Thanks for the compliments and also the feedback. I've already written and sent the next part in for publishing. I hope I do more of what you're saying here (showing and cuck emotion). If not, I'll definitely apply it to future stories. Cheers!

Oops. That last message was meant for DucksCuck.

#slow burn 🥰 Loved it!

Very well done! Great read. Loved it. Only complaint would be that it would have been "fun" to see some of the interactions/dialogue between Abby and her man when they were coming to realize they were lost.

Love the intricacy, details and character depth. Love how its part journal part first person narrative.

5 stars!

Thanks for sharing ^_^