All Comments on 'The Holiday Cheat'

by elise101285

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toesucker1toesucker110 months ago

This was so well done. The story had a nice buildup to the main event. Gita tossing the bikini bottom out of the jacuzzi was great. Raw lust in the bathroom? Oooh yes.

Write more, please. Also give the main character a name so we can refer to her when we write admiring comments.

Mikayla_BartonMikayla_Barton10 months ago

Oh this was absolutely outstanding, had me so turned on. WOW

AliceGeeAliceGee10 months ago

Very hot, very erotic. A good build up leading to a very arousing climax. Well done.

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I am Elise and I am the narrator on these stories. I am Female, Bisexual but have same sex partner. Love reading erotic stories and decided to pen a few of my adventures and fantasies.