All Comments on 'The Hometown "Friend"'

by WalkingParadox

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This is so sad, I actually thought it might end with this poor guy taking a dive off of the roof of the dorm. Imagine the note left behind if that happened.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

Realdeal123Realdeal1239 months ago

So no one in the dorm gonna condemn Sarah for being massive bitch but instead they just look down on the victim? This story is quite shallow and generic.

Lovemaster123Lovemaster1239 months ago

Too one side, lack of originality and very predictable.

horny_bumpkinhorny_bumpkin9 months ago

I don't know what the hell other people are mad about, it's not supposed to be a novel with twists and turns that keeps the reader on their toes, it's supposed to be arousing and it is. Thanks for writing

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

There is one problem, this story isn't arousing.

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