All Comments on 'The Honeybird Bimbo'

A cute story, especially considering it to be your first story, and without an editor at that. I think MC stories in general benefit from being longer so that the transformations can be magnified and detailed more, but I’m certainly not complaining. Also a fan of the compassionate villain, and would have liked to see a bit more of her after the fact. Look forward to seeing more of your work.

This was probably one of my favorite one-off MC reads in a long time. We will watch your career with great interest.

Great story, hope you write more.

Well done! I think this could spawn a sequel or more

This is fantastic! The dynamic between Evie and Catherine was really sweet. I'm not used to the style of narrator you choose, but I realized gradually that it was probably deliberate--the frequent perspective shifting, the paraphrasing of scenes--and I actually think it works pretty well! A really quality bimbofication story--I really look forward to the next story you put out, sequel or no! :)

We loved this, my partner has fantasised about being turned into a bimbo and this pressed her buttons massively although by her own admission she is already half way there. We would love to know more of Catherine's exploits.

Lovely story