All Comments on 'The Hook-Up'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Enjoyed the story, but have to nit-pick - the room number changed between telling the friends 942, saying it was correct, then taking her to 902.

Thank you :-)

MikePaulWritesMikePaulWrites9 months ago

Oh, there has to be another chapter, at least.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I noticed that too, wondered if it was on purpose. She should have noticed.

AmbulAmbul9 months ago

This is hot! Ready for the next chapter.

toastywarm01toastywarm017 months ago

I’d like to be Shawn.

PollythePollythe5 months ago

Part two now please

AmbulAmbul29 days ago

Hopeful that there will be another chapter.

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