All Comments on 'The Hot Springs'

by JohannesTEvans

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I love your work; I've read a couple of your other stories but this one in particular stood out to me for comment because normally I'm more interested in wild fantasy sex, but this was so well written I couldn't look away. I love that Naoki is an older, pretty average guy, and I love that the characters and narration feel so ordinary and yet so intense. Naoki's internal narration is a delight too, from the specific uses of euphemism and poetic speech, to the slightly awkward stuttering and shyness as he talks around more intimate matters. He feels very believable. Is there anywhere else to read or support your work?

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