All Comments on 'The Hot Wife's Bi Husband's Diary'

So many mistakes they interfered with reading the story.

Cant wait to hear more

Fantastic, more please

Awful. Too many mistakes. Did you read this before you posted it?

Nice story. Would love to share my bride like this. I would want lots of pictures and video for later. A+

I don't think drugs should be introduced to these stories. To promote coke, weed, and other illegal drugs is just wrong.

Lots of grammatical errors. You need to get a really good proof reader to help you with the English language.

Lots of words were used wrongly throughout this story and that made it hard to read.

Good story line…But…I had to work getting through the grammar and misspelling… I liked the story and the weed is fine, but ditch the coke, and hard drugs… alcohol and weed are much more acceptable…. Re. The grammar/spelling and the mistakes I can only say reread or send them to me, others or friends to edit… no judgement, just a suggestion… keep writing as I said I like the story line…