All Comments on 'The Hound and the White Rabbit'

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greysamgreysamabout 3 years ago
lovely

What a lovely read: the opening description about owning the city was delightful. My one suggestion; use the word "contempt" instead of "despise."

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I mostly write stories on female submission, pet, and impact play, inspired by my encounters in real life. I have discovered only recently Literotica, so I am uploading all my work here. I have started with a group of stories set in Tokyo locations,and now I am switching to...