All Comments on 'The House Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Oh this is really good!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Ohh!

It's getting intense!

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 12 years ago
Exciting

I've got a shiver running down my spine! It looks like Dwight can't fight Sebastion's possession of his body. This doesn't look good!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Whoa!

As long Minerva and Dwight don't have to die I'm good:)

Great Update, Ms. Kal

jazz1190jazz1190over 12 years ago

love it love it love it!!! keep them coming

tostsitostsiover 12 years ago
This is great.

keep it coming.

green2ballsgreen2ballsover 12 years ago
And then.

And then, and then along came who?What will happen? Who will vanish who? Stay tune for the next chapter of the (House)tan tan tan......This is how I feel waiting for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

So it said it's dwight or someone who looks like dwight. That little bit of information got me wondering what's going to happen next.

SoulHolder11SoulHolder11over 12 years ago
Hmm

Im so beside my self with wonder....gosh i don't knw how u pull this off

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Why is she so stupid?

She argued for a damned hour? Really? Is what happened to her in the woods not enough for her to get a grip? She lacks the sense of a gnat, and almost deserves to be harmed by Sebastian. If a man tells you to run if you see him, please listen, you dumb idiot.

sweetie86sweetie86over 12 years ago

I NEED MORE!!!! PLEASE

QuietmahoganystormQuietmahoganystormover 12 years ago
Freakin' awesome!

Loved the update. I thought it would conclude with this chapter, but I love the twists & turns! I'm on the edge of my seat here. I hope Dwight can fight off Sebastian. Sebastian is a pretty wily character.

huntersangelhuntersangelover 12 years ago
ohhh nooo, kalamazoo, how could you?????

doggone it! somebody get me a shot gun so i can kill those damn cliffhangers! wow, i hate you kalamazoo, now i have to wait? do me a favor will you? write stories that are horrible so i won't care if cliff hangers happen and have to wait. jeez! ok, i'll wait, only because i have no choice, but give my heart a break ok? no more cliffhangers!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
GO BACK TO CHAPTER 8 POST

AND READ THE POST THAT I JUST WROTE KALAMAZOO THERES A QUOTE FROM MY FATHER THAT I WANT YOU TO USE .LEAVE THAT FOR THE PRICK THAT CALL U A CUNT

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Love It !!

Cant wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Like the story but...

The woman really is more than stupid...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
AHHH

I love the story but Minerva cannot keep denouncing these things. She needs to realize that there is most likely more to the story, and that these things are real! Keep writing!

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
Are your duscks in a row?????

Can NOT believe you did this!!!!!!!! This is like scenting a delicous meal and getting to the kitchen to find NOTHING!!!!!

Will await the next chapter...........'nough said..................

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good story

but this chapter really sucked.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
noooo

I hope you have the rest written !! This is torture!!! Plz write quick!!!

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