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All Comments on 'The House of Louve 01: A House Tale'

by Barber_o_Saville

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Your story has great potential but I don’t think it’s for me, although much of it was very erotic all of the references both direct and indirect to incest are a massive turn off for me. It’s the kind of thing that you should be including in the Tags which act as both advertising and as trigger warnings.

Best of luck with your writing

Tess (uk)

Barber_o_SavilleBarber_o_Savilleabout 3 years agoAuthor

I apologize for not putting in the right "Tag" lines. Sorry it was not to your liking. Best of Luck finding your genera.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Your other story Not your typical family was really good. This story has a very good writing but I find it kind of boring. But you are a good writer.

Inspired by your story I have also submitted a story.

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I have been criticized by some individuals with no name for my darker side of my stories, honestly constructive criticism is far better than assuming one’s character is not well received - you have not lived in my head, body or soul, you have not walked a mile, yard, foot , or...