All Comments on 'The Hung Games Pt. 03'

by apple231601

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Love it. Please finish can't wait for her to be with her promise, great story. Continue writing.

birddog22birddog22about 7 years ago
beautiful

great story very hot

SteelSaurusSteelSaurusalmost 7 years ago
Awesome Work, Looking Forward for More

Awesome work as always, very raw and emotional with some light humor thrown in to ease the tension. A couple of typos but nothing major.

One thing that I missed was that while the women had their breast sizes, there was no equivalent measurement for the men's endowments. I think the best I got was a single mention that his dick was a foot-long. Any chance to have more explicit showing in future rounds?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Dayum the refractory period rule... given that disadvantage it's a wonder the men have any hope at all of defeating the women :P

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous