All Comments on 'The Hung Games Pt. 03'

Dayum the refractory period rule... given that disadvantage it's a wonder the men have any hope at all of defeating the women :P

Awesome work as always, very raw and emotional with some light humor thrown in to ease the tension. A couple of typos but nothing major.

One thing that I missed was that while the women had their breast sizes, there was no equivalent measurement for the men's endowments. I think the best I got was a single mention that his dick was a foot-long. Any chance to have more explicit showing in future rounds?

great story very hot

Love it. Please finish can't wait for her to be with her promise, great story. Continue writing.