All Comments on 'The Innocent Adulteresses Pt. 02'

Is she Angie or is she Alice? Please decide and maybe run a search and replace before you submit your story. 2

Poor Girl , 'fucked' by two guy without any benefit or promotion

She has to be 'compansated'

So when does her husband find out he is married to a slut and get revenge on her and the ones she is screwing

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And how is she innocent? Do you mean to imply her innocence as in this case gullible or just plane stupid? She far far from being innocent when it comes to adultery.

In the first paragraph of chapter 1 you said the young wife was going to be seduced by an older more sophisticated man. But she has not. She has been forced to have sex with two slime balls to keep her job. I know this goes on but in today's society this is a highly inappropriate story. As a father of three beautiful grown women this story is fucked up. Furthermore any man that has to resort to tactics like this to get laid is a pathetic human being. Also you write like you are still in high school. If you have this much free time take the practice SAT test every night. If nothing else it might make you a better writter.

Innocent really. She is still cheating. Spells divorce.

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