All Comments on 'The Interview'

You have Jerry nude in his office and then taking off his clothes to screw Jannet. I personally hope you make this one a series as it has potential. Keep writing, linda

Hy idrinkbeer2006,

is this story fiction or non fiction? you say Jannett is single with children is she divorced or widowed? if she is divorced through the courts and if the courts or the ex husband should find out she has that job with a porno firm they will take the children away from her because she would be considered an unfit mother for the children in a un healthy back ground for the children she will be stripped of her responsibilities of guardianship as a parent you might want to consider those thoughts in real life.

Atlanta,Ga

I like the premis but you really need to take some time to think things through. This could be the beginig of a great story if you (pardon the pun), flesh out your characters and go a bit slower. Keep on writing; it's good for the mind.

Jimm