All Comments on 'The Interview Ch. 01'

good first attempt, i'm sure the writing will improve but i am enjoying the story so far

Get an editor or don't bother.

As I said in the beginning it was my first story, yes I know it wasn't the best but you really don't need to be so mean... I am Thinking about redoing it but only later.

And thank you for letting us share your new story. I know how hard it is to pluck up the courage to send in your MS, and to be frank, it was far from perfect; most of the stories here are, and most folks who read them make allowances for beginners.

Nonnies, however, are different, and just love to rain on everyone else's parade; my advice is to take up the constructive criticism you might receive and to ignore the snipers too cowardly to even put a name to their vitriolic comments.

I look forward to reading Chapter 2 very soon. Well done -- four stars.