All Comments on 'The Invisible Woman Ch. 12'

I wonder if Corinna figured it out too? And she thinks he must really like her. Can’t wait to see her reaction when Geoff kicks her out.

the female perspective you give in your story.

I will critique this slightly. Not trying to sound harsh, but, this is becoming a run of the mill cheating story, but from the woman's view, so it seems.

When submitting your story, add more tags, such as: threesome, anal, lesbian cheating, bdsm, etc. I think it might improve your viewings number and maybe number of comments.

I found a few grammar mistakes, but, eh, we all make them.

I enjoyed your 'Welcome to the Neighborhood' story also.

Please, keep writing.