All Comments on 'The Island of Depravity Ch. 01'

Just started to get I teresting

Great start with much potential. Playing up maledom and Femdom aspects will

Help story flow. Have Dr. Easterly attend a party or two. Please include a lot of

CFNM and CMNF components.

Allen

Good writing, but the chapter was way too short.

This was really well written and the historical references were a nice touch, I think your story shows a lot of potential. Eagerly awaiting more installments.

Can't say a lot more till I read the followers.

Cassette recorders did not exist in 1957. Jack would have had a reel-to-reel recorder on which to play the tape.

stories were better then this